Wade on Birmingham

the human heart

It beats coldly in
a sheltered place, only to
warm with openness.

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  • 2 Yips for “the human heart”

    1. alarob
      Friday, November 21, 2008, 9:27 pm
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      You know, these are not traditional haiku, but I like them a lot. English speakers often just fold a 17-syllable sentence into three lines and call it a haiku. It’s a pet peeve of mine. It’s also essentially what you’re doing — but somehow it works most of the time. Each line is its own element, or something. It’s not strict haiku, but it’s good writing.

    2. Wade
      Saturday, November 22, 2008, 9:51 pm
      2

      Thanks!

      It’s not even close to traditional haiku, since I don’t always include nature images.

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